Well Illuminati65 might have shared some things you could work on, I think it is fantastic. I will share the good and bad qualities:
Good qualities:
- Cool beginning as he stated
- Same mystery vibe as the others
- The first 5 seconds of the drop are cool
- Better than my songs (lol)
Bad qualities:
- After the 5 seconds of the drop, you could have extended that same 5 seconds. It is kind of weird that you add to the song beat after the five seconds
- The drop did not have dubstep jamming? Nate's did, so I think you could have done that to make it a more of a TOE sequel.
- It is pretty repetitive. Try to make more variety for your next songs.
Overall rating: 8/10. Try to fix the mistakes to made for your next songs. RANK ON TIER LIST: LOW A (caps lock because tier lists do that, lol) 5 in a half stars.